
Continuing my series highlighting the six tales in my new fantasy anthology The Dark Forest Within, this time I’m taking the proverbial magnifying glass to the fifth story in the anthology: Winged.
Written just a couple of months ago and added to this collection at the last minute, this short story wasn’t one I’d originally intended to include, as I thought it might benefit from a rewrite in a few months, after I’d set it aside for a while. However, my wife persuaded me otherwise. Winged fits the anthology’s main theme like a glove, with another journey into a dangerous forest, albeit a rather different journey from the one in Ravenseed, Wulfric’s Quest, and indeed Bloodmire, the final story in this volume.
Winged is a direct prequel to Ravenseed, set one year beforehand. In the first act, it features Sir Matthew and Sir Peter, their squires Robin and Hugh, and their horses, all of whom feature in the main narrative of Ravenseed. However, whilst they are main characters in the novel, they are side characters here, riding in escort to Winged’s protagonist, a mysterious woman of the King’s court called Lady Amelia. At the advice of the King’s wizard, she undertakes a dangerous quest for reasons that she initially keeps secret from those escorting her. But Sir Matthew, Sir Peter, and the others are only instructed to escort her so far, to the end of the Forest of Arden. From there, she is to continue alone.
As the first act of the story progresses, it becomes clear there’s a lot more to Lady Amelia than meets the eye. She appears to have unusual powers. What’s more, when the party faces danger from attacking bandits, it becomes abundantly clear that she doesn’t require the protection of knights. Her escort is merely to keep up appearances. But what does she seek in the Forest of Arden, and why does she intend to travel off the safe paths through it, into areas where demons lurk in the most dangerous parts of the wood?
Per the other Dark Ages-set tales in this volume, Winged owes a tonal debt to Arthurian myth. Carefully tiptoeing around spoilers, I’d add that the finale echoes ideas found in the climax of Ravenseed, though again, I stress Winged is a standalone story. You don’t need to have read Ravenseed first, nor will reading this first ruin any part of that novel. There is, at one point, a tiny tease of the dark events ahead of Sir Peter and the others, but again, nothing is spoiled, and this story ultimately does not concern the knights.
One other tiny point of interest: The first draft of this story featured a sequence involving a dragon. I felt it didn’t work, so I cut it out and reworked that entire section. By strange coincidence, this is the second time I’ve written a scene involving a dragon, only for it to be subsequently cut. The first draft of Ravenseed featured a chapter about a dragon that was entirely removed (more on that here, if you’re interested). Perhaps I’m not destined to write about dragons. But even without dragons, I hope you enjoy Winged.
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