How I Made a Short Documentary About My Latest Novel

Yours truly, in a screengrab from A Thorn in Winter: A Look Inside. Credit: Gajmo Productions

As some of you may be aware, I recently caught the filmmaking bug again. After my last project (a short, no-budget psychological horror film called Safe Space, which you can watch on YouTube here), I turned my attention to A Thorn in Winter, the mystery thriller novel I’d managed to persuade Ireland-based publisher Ring of Culture to roll the dice on. I wanted to make a short documentary to provide more insight into the novel and bring it to life a bit, but how would I go about it?

The limitations of shooting with no budget on an iPhone once again proved a challenge. However, I wasn’t exactly inexperienced. In my previous television job, I’d produced and directed documentary pieces promoting other novels (not mine) or stories featuring dramatic recreations. Of course, in those days I had production budgets. Not to mention professional camera operators, editors, sound recordists, and audio post-production engineers who did the hard work, whilst I flounced around barking instructions. But on this project, since I was the subject, I had to rely on family members for any shots that featured me on camera.

My wife and my children were troopers in this respect. However, directing from in front of the camera is never easy, and this led to setbacks. For example, I opted for a total reshoot of both the main interview and my first set of links out and about in various locations from the novel. In the former, the eyeline wasn’t quite right. In the latter, I’d stupidly worn an unflattering T-shirt that clung to me, adding far more pounds than any camera is legally permitted to pile on. Normally, I wouldn’t care about such things, but I needed people to pay attention to what I was saying, rather than be distracted by unflattering excess chunkiness.

In any event, that reshoot was the first of many, as other spanners were thrown into the works. For instance, I shot this over the summer whilst going back and forth on book edits with the publisher. When it was pointed out that the name Leila Williams had been used for a character in one of the Fifty Shades novels (which I haven’t read), I realised I’d neglected my usual task of googling all the names in my book to make sure there weren’t any unfortunate coincidences. Of course, a name cannot be copyrighted, but the publisher quite rightly expressed concern that we didn’t want readers visualising a character from Fifty Shades whilst reading my novel. Thus, Leila Williams became Leila Wilmond. Unfortunately, I’d shot a bunch of links mentioning the original name, so they had to be reshot. Again.

In my experience, it’s tougher filming a drama than a documentary. However, if you plan the production thoroughly, shooting all the coverage you need (as was the case with Safe Space; no reshoots required), it’s a joy to edit. In contrast, a documentary may be easier to film, but it’s much harder to wrestle into a coherent final cut. I’d initially planned something about 30 minutes long. Yet the more I looked at the material, the more I realised I needed to cut it down drastically. In my judgement, at this point, no one particularly cares about my life story, as I’m not famous (yet). But I did need to get viewers interested in A Thorn in Winter. With that in mind, I ditched almost all the autobiographical footage and kept the focus on the narrative.

The main interview got hacked, slashed, and re-ordered multiple times. Much of what I shot on location ended up on the cutting room floor. Several additional reshoots occurred as the edit evolved. Sometimes I had to reshoot for technical reasons (such as the sound not being up to scratch). Other times, my delivery was wrong (again, it’s extremely difficult to direct oneself). However, one production element did go relatively smoothly: The dramatic recreations set to readings from the novel. For these, I once again persuaded the excellent Abi Stevens, who starred in Safe Space, to play both the aforementioned Leila Wilmond, the main character, and the victim whose murder from decades earlier Leila is investigating. We managed to film all the recreations in one day.

Ultimately, A Thorn in Winter: A Look Inside turned out reasonably well, despite being rather rough around the edges. The final cut clocks in at twelve and a half minutes, and I think it’s pacy enough not to outstay its welcome. In fact, it probably all looks deceptively straightforward, but believe me, a lot of agonising went into deciding what to include, what to cut, and the order in which the various items appear. I hope you find it compelling as something to whet the appetite, and I also hope you enjoy seeing a little bit of southwest England. I should add that whilst the plot is discussed to some degree, there are no ruinous spoilers. You can watch by clicking the embed below.

A Thorn in Winter is out now. Paperbacks and ebooks are now available directly from my publisher, Ring of Culture (click here). Additional retail outlets will follow soon.

A Thorn in Winter is Out Now!

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My new supernaturally tinged mystery thriller novel, A Thorn in Winter, is out now! I’m thrilled to finally share this nail-biter with you, and I hope you find it suitably page-turning.

Here’s a bit of a plot tease, from the back cover:

Bored council worker Leila is restless in her marriage. Secretly relieved by the sudden death of her husband’s best friend, who’d been blackmailing her over an affair she’d had with a local TV news presenter, she is alarmed to discover a link between the blackmail and a decades-old unsolved murder. What’s more, she bears an uncanny resemblance to the victim. 

With the affair still threatening to destroy her marriage, an encounter with a tarot card reader pushes Leila into further investigation. With every discovery she makes, Leila becomes less certain who she can trust. A myriad of secrets lie along her perilous path to a terrifying truth that could cost her life.

Also, for good measure, here’s the bio about yours truly, also from the back cover:

Simon Dillon is a prolific author, primarily of thriller and horror novels including Death Nest, The Irresistible Summons, Spectre of Springwell Forest, and his latest, A Thorn in Winter. An avid advocate of page-turning mystery and suspense, he lives in southwest England with his wife and children, deriving endless inspiration from his surroundings, local history, folklore, and mythology. When he’s not exploring the moors and coasts or submerged in a book, he’s probably at the cinema.

Over the next few weeks on this site, there will be further articles exploring different aspects of the novel, excerpts, and even a short documentary exploring this novel in more detail (but without spoilers). Watch this space.

Paperbacks and ebooks of A Thorn in Winter are now available directly from my publisher, Ring of Culture. Additional retail outlets will follow later, but for now, you can order the novel here.

(Header image created by author in Canva. Novel cover courtesy of Ring of Culture Creative Services.)

Thrilling News! Novel Publication Announcement

I am ecstatic to announce that my mystery thriller novel, A Thorn in Winter, will be published this autumn. The precise date is to be confirmed, but my publisher, the Ireland-based Ring of Culture, has agreed to let me make the announcement early on my website.

Needless to say, I’m absolutely thrilled by this news. Thank you all so much for all your support and encouragement over the years. This publication deal is a major victory and the culmination of many years of hard work. I wrote A Thorn in Winter in early 2023, and it has since been through a few drafts, but beta reader response has been ecstatic. I can’t wait to share this book with you, so watch this space.

At this point, I’m remaining tight-lipped on the plot, but I can tell you it’s a page-turning whodunnit involving a young woman initially caught in a web of blackmail, only for her to uncover something much more sinister when a tarot card reading links her situation to a decades-old unsolved murder case. She discovers an alarming personal connection to the victim and consequently finds herself in deadly peril.

This twist-laden tale features everything you’ve come to expect from my modern gothic thrillers, including an imperilled heroine, sinister locations, buried secrets (literally and figuratively), and a host of supporting characters who aren’t quite what they seem. There’s also a romantic subplot of sorts, amid themes of infidelity, revenge, and something potentially supernatural. A rollercoaster of suspicion and suspense, you won’t want to miss this one.

Over the next few months, more will be revealed (include an exact publication date), so watch this space. Please note, the above image is not the official artwork, merely something I put together for this update.

(Image created by author in Canva.)

New Novel Update

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I’m thrilled to announce that I’ve completed the first draft of my latest novel. I typically write a new novel at least once per year, normally between January and April, having done the hard work of research, preparing character profiles, chapter outlines, and so forth, during the late summer months to around November of the previous year. It’s always a great feeling when I’m able to draw a proper line under the first draft.

What’s it called?

I’m keeping the real title a secret for now, but the working title was False Witness. I didn’t want to use that as a real title, considering how many published novels are entitled False Witness. Finding a unique title is very difficult these days and involves a lot of googling about to make sure it hasn’t already been used. Most titles cannot be copyrighted, so in one sense it doesn’t matter, but at the same time, it makes discoverability of my work all the trickier if I don’t come up with something entirely original.

What’s it about?

At the moment, the story is under wraps, suffice it to say, the 93,000-word manuscript is a nail-biting mystery thriller involving a prank that goes wrong. It also concerns a dark secret in the protagonist’s past that comes back to haunt her present. Yes, I know the latter statement could apply to just about any of my mystery thriller novels, but I’m keeping plot descriptions deliberately vague for now. I will add that this particular dark secret is unlike any I’ve written about previously, and it definitely ranks among the darkest of dark secrets hidden by my protagonists.

When can I read it?

Not for at least two years, alas. Why? Well, after completing a first draft, I generally put it aside for twelve months so I can approach the second draft with fresh eyes. In the meantime, I am about to start shaping the second draft of the novel I wrote this time last year; another gripping mystery thriller. With any luck, this time next year, agents and publishers will be mulling it over, and hopefully saying yes. That’s assuming they don’t first say yes to The Hobbford Giant, yet another horror-thriller mystery currently under consideration. If I get no bites, I expect that one will be self-published sometime in the autumn.

In the meantime, I have an equally exciting publication announcement coming soon, so watch this space.

New Novel Update Plus Title Reveal

Image by Andrew Martin from Pixabay

One of my major goals this year was to write the first draft of my new gothic mystery novel. I can tell you that I have now completed this. It’s a twisty-turny murder mystery thriller with hints of the supernatural, and I’m rather pleased with how it turned out.

What’s it called?

Drumroll… The title is A Thorn in Winter. This title not only sounds suitably sinister but has a hidden meaning that only becomes apparent as the plot unfolds.

What’s it about?

It concerns a young woman who is being blackmailed. Upon learning her blackmailer is linked to a decades-old unsolved murder, she discovers an alarming personal connection to the victim, and consequently finds herself in deadly peril.

I don’t really want to get more specific than that at this point, as this is one of the most twist-laden novels I’ve ever written. At the same time, it delves into themes of infidelity, revenge, and even reincarnation. It ticks many of my gothic mystery trope boxes: Imperilled heroine, sinister locations, buried secrets (literally and figuratively), and supporting characters who aren’t quite what they seem. It’s a rollercoaster of suspicion and suspense, and I think it has some emotional heft too (there’s a melancholy romantic subplot of sorts).

“Modbridge” looks a bit like this. Photo by Beth Jnr on Unsplash

The bulk of the novel is set in the fictional town of Modbridge, with occasional visits to Plymouth. Modbridge is a small town based on the real town of Modbury. The name combines the two local towns of Modbury and Kingsbridge. The steep main road running through Modbury, with shops either side, is also a key location that inspired a similar location in the novel.

When can I read it?

Not for a while, as I’ll probably sit on this manuscript for at least a year, per my standard procedure, before looking at it again with fresh eyes. On the other hand, I’m about to polish up the novel I completed this time a year ago, The Hobbford Giant, with a view to submitting it to agents and publishers. So you are one step closer to seeing that one. Watch this space.

New Novel Update

Yes, my new novel features a sinister house. Photo by Ján Jakub Naništa on Unsplash

This post is a bit of a cheat, because it is little more than me updating you by saying I’ll soon be updating you. Updating you on what, you may ask? The novel I’ve almost finished writing. I mentioned this novel in my New Year’s Day post. It’s another gripping gothic mystery thriller with spooky, possibly supernatural undertones. I suspect it will be right up your street if you enjoyed my earlier novels such as The Birds Began to Sing, Phantom Audition, and so forth.

I typically spend the winter months writing novels. It distracts me from feeling depressed about the dismal, dark, dank weather, and gives me something to do in hibernation. Getting to a first draft by March (or thereabouts) also makes me feel as though I’ve achieved something significant early in the year. Of course, sometimes I go on to write additional novels. My most productive year to date was 2017, where I managed to pen Spectre of Springwell Forest, Echo and the White Howl, and a third, as-yet unpublished novel entitled A Statement of Disbelief.

Three points about the new novel: 1) No, I’m not going to tell you anything about the plot. At least, not yet. I will simply repeat what I said in my New Year post: “It is set in a fictional south-west England town and features a young journalist who gets drawn into a local mystery with links to her past.” 2) Progress wise, I’m on chapter 19, having written around 75,000 words. 3) I reckon I’ll have a first draft finished by the end of this month, with an estimated word count of around 85,000 – 90,000 words.

I had the idea for this novel in the middle of writing another early last year. The research, outlining, character profiles, and so forth were prepared during the summer and autumn, and I started writing the novel in earnest in January. Do I have a title yet? No, but I will by the time the first draft is finished. The experience of writing this novel has been smooth on the whole, though not without the occasional interruption from other voices in my head, demanding I start on the next story idea. And the next, and the next… Those voices are terribly unreasonable, though they can occasionally be cowed into temporary submission by telling them to form an orderly queue and shut up.

More on the next novel soon. Watch this space.

New Novel! Phantom Audition out on 19th October

PHANTOM AUDITIONI’ve got a new novel coming out. Another so soon after The Irresistible Summons, I hear you ask? Yes. This one’s called Phantom Audition.

A supernaturally tinged psychological mystery, Phantom Audition is another gripping nail-biter, but for all it’s creepy edges, I refuse to call it a horror story, as it really isn’t all that scary. I know the cover and the blurb make it appear otherwise, but this is more of a suspenseful, mess-with-your-head tale than an outright terrifying one. Despite a violent sequence near the finale, I reckon my mother could probably read it, and she scares quite easily.

Here’s the blurb from the back of the book:

Small-time actress Mia Yardley, recently widowed wife of renowned actor Steven Yardley, discovers her late husband’s secret acting diary.

The diary details appointments made with a psychic medium, who advised Steven on which roles to take. It also raises questions about his mysterious and inexplicable suicide.

Seeking answers, Mia speaks to the medium, but in doing so is drawn into an ever- deepening mystery about what happened to her husband during the final days of his life. Eventually, she is forced to ask the terrible question: was Steven Yardley murdered by a vengeful evil from beyond the grave?

Phantom Audition is published by Dragon Soul Press, and is out on the 19th of October. Click here to pre-order your copy now.